Media Editing Plan

Currently our film is too long so I have written some editing adjustments we can make to reduce the elapsed time of our film.

Second Scene

Add similar (but not same) music as first scene

Open first shot with a very quick fade-from-black

First shot could start just before chris drives round corner

Inside-car shot as you brake: Start later (so the car is pretty much stopped already)

^^^Darken first few driving shot to suit the “break in” shot brightness

Open car door sooner

Feet-to-head ascending shot: Speed up UNTIL you can see jamie’s hand in pocket

Enhance sound of breaking-into window

Darken harvey’s legs at bottom-left of break-in shot

^Cut end off slightly of this shot

Start enter-corridor shot later (so Jamie walks into corridor almost straight away)

“Peter” voice slightly too echoey- try adding treble to make it seem as if she’s behind a door)

Cut end of corridor-shot off slightly (just after door-opening noise)

Quick-cut-to-black at end, just before scream

^Enhance scream noise (cut end off like we talked about)